SNOBS
"So what sort of books do you write?" I asked.
Literary fiction author said, "I write literary fiction."
"I see... Um, what is your book about?"
"A woman's life's journey." Literary fiction author's nose lifted ceilingward.
"Ah, so woman's fiction?"
"Not hardly. And what is it YOU write?"
"YA paranormal," I said, "with aspects of science fiction and fantasy."
Literary fiction author gazed at me with THE look that was meant to pity and to put a lowly genre writer such as me in my place.
(Bet I had more fun writing in my nose-upturning genre than literary fiction author did with literary fiction! Just saying.)
CON JOBS
From a recent writing class, the instructor offered to edit a few chapters for a set fee. The turnaround was quick, and the editor asked for a couple of more chapters to edit as a bonus. ("I just love your writing style." "You're such a fast learner.")
For further edits the editor offered to edit for a set fee per hour. The edits took a bit longer, with the same chapters undergoing multiple edits.
Next go around, the editors fee went up 50%, and deeper editing per chapter was suggested.
I passed.
THINGAMABOBS
Hubby is my initial reader of edited chapters.
When I used the method from You Can Write a Novel by James V. Smith Jr. to adjust chapter pacing, he was impressed with the increased pace.
I was thrilled when he asked about the technique.
A few minutes into my Readability Statistics explanation, he said, "Whatever you're doing, it's working."
Off to revise using my thingamabob process.
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Monday, July 8, 2013
Saturday, June 22, 2013
Pacing is a Booger
Challenge #1: Use the word "booger" in a blog title. (Won that dare!) and Challenge #2: Revise/update pacing of scenes and overall book chapters to accomplish a thriller read. (In progress.)
Despite Challenge #1, the honest truth is that pacing a scene or chapter IS a booger. According to dictionary.com, in addition to the obvious, a booger is a noun 1. Informal. any person or thing: That shark was a mean-looking booger. A booger is also listed as something or someone frightening.
James V. Smith Jr.'s You Can Write a Novel, 2nd Edition, presents a method using the Readability Statistics feature included in most word processing software programs.
Once I actually get the gist of this pacing tool, I truly believe this process will be The Ultimate Pacing Tool as James V. Smith Jr. claims.
In the mean time... Argh. Grr. Ack.
But I'm sure the learning curve effort will be worth gaining the strength of the technique. In the long run, learning the process will be a positive, in the mean time, I struggle mightily to grasp something that is actually explained in simple terms.
After I finish revising several chapters today, I am going to reread You Can Write a Novel, finish revising Book #1, then move on to using the pacing technique in a final revise-through before sending the revised version to an editor.
Very much a challenge. But I am learning, and I will get there. I'm gonna conquer this pacing booger. Dare me! Come one make a dare...
Despite Challenge #1, the honest truth is that pacing a scene or chapter IS a booger. According to dictionary.com, in addition to the obvious, a booger is a noun 1. Informal. any person or thing: That shark was a mean-looking booger. A booger is also listed as something or someone frightening.
James V. Smith Jr.'s You Can Write a Novel, 2nd Edition, presents a method using the Readability Statistics feature included in most word processing software programs.
Once I actually get the gist of this pacing tool, I truly believe this process will be The Ultimate Pacing Tool as James V. Smith Jr. claims.
In the mean time... Argh. Grr. Ack.
But I'm sure the learning curve effort will be worth gaining the strength of the technique. In the long run, learning the process will be a positive, in the mean time, I struggle mightily to grasp something that is actually explained in simple terms.
After I finish revising several chapters today, I am going to reread You Can Write a Novel, finish revising Book #1, then move on to using the pacing technique in a final revise-through before sending the revised version to an editor.
Very much a challenge. But I am learning, and I will get there. I'm gonna conquer this pacing booger. Dare me! Come one make a dare...
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