Showing posts with label Develpmental Edit. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Develpmental Edit. Show all posts

Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Revision Plan

Revision Plan is just that. A plan to revise.

The four-page Critique Report from Cathy Yardley was an eye-opening, bang-up guide on how to tighten and strengthen the shape and focus of the story.

The comments within the manuscript are as valuable as flecks of gold to me.


My initial Revision Plan is simple:
  • Tweak and rearrange index cards
  • Limit Point of View to three (3) characters only
  • Write a few new scenes
  • Flesh out some existing scenes
 Current Goals:
  • Redo Goal, Motivation, Conflict, Disaster (GMCD) Table
  • Send Updated GMCD Table to Cathy for feedback
Additional Goals:
  • Complete GMCs and GMCDs for Book #2
  • Submit Info for Book #2 to Cathy
 Time-Frame:
  • Reorganize scenes in the next week
  • Submit GMCD Table for Book #1 by October 1st
  • Submit GMC/GMCD Info for Book #2 by October 5th
Onward! (Thanks to Rock Your Writing's Cathy Yardley!)

Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Time for a Pleasant Pause

The potential edits for Book #1, Series #1, resulting from the Developmental Edit that I received from Cathy Yardley's Rock Your Revisions critique, may affect the direction of Book #2; therefore, I am putting the Fast Drafting of Book #2 on hold for a couple of days.

I am reviewing the Developmental Edit -- what an awesome tool -- and will speak with Cathy Yardley tomorrow for more detailed guidance involving a Revision Plan for Book #1.

The Development Edit is quite an eye opener because Cathy points out issues that because I was too close to story I didn't see.

So, for today, I review the Critique Report and the comments Cathy made within the manuscript. It's a rainy day here, so I think a cup of hot chocolate and a relaxing pause while I review is most definitely in order.

What a Developmental Edit Is and Is Not

A Developmental Edit is a high level critique that does not include:
- Page-by-page edit
- Line-by-line edit
- Phraseology feedback

What a Developmental Edit is is a critique regarding:
- Plot Issues
- Pacing
- Information Sharing and Open Loops
- Point of View
- Voice

Foremost, a Developmental Edit is a learning experience and an opportunity to make my book more powerful and hopefully a great start to a series.

Thank you, Cathy Yardley of Rock Your Revisions fame. Your Developmental Edit rocks!

Next, a Revision Plan!

Monday, September 10, 2012

Expect, Plan, Prepare

The manuscript for Book #1, Series #1 has been submitted for developmental editing. I'm experiencing excitement and expectation, topped with nervousness and uneasiness.

This will be my first experience with this sort of feedback. From Cathy Yardley's Rock Your Writing website, this is my limited knowledge of a full manuscript or developmental edit: "I will analyze how your plot is working, and check if your characters are built with believable motivations to match the story you’ve got. I’ll also  recommend fixes for any story issues I see cropping up."

The edit is scheduled to be completed in a couple of weeks; therefore, I will be better able to blog about what a full manuscript or developmental edit is or is not in a few weeks.

In the meantime, I will not be sitting with my hands in my lap waiting (although it may feel that way on the inside, big time.)

What I will be doing, since the beginning of Book #2 became a bang-up ending for Book #1, is planning and plotting out Book #2, as well as sketching out the rest of the series in more detail. To help me progress more quickly once I begin the first draft, in addition to filling out index cards with my one-line scene descriptions, I am going to attempt to pre-plan the Goal, Motivation, Conflict, and Disaster (GMCD) for as many scenes as possible. (Look out, MS Word table, here I come).

For me, having a better idea of where I'm going (sort of like creating a map and having that map as a reference later on), will help me produce more solid first draft material in a shorter period of time.

My third month of writing full-time did not go well or as planned due to health issues, etc.; however, I'm looking forward to month four being much more productive and fulfilling, writing-wise and otherwise.

So in the meantime, while waiting on the results of the developmental edit, I write.

So, in the words of Dennis Waitley, “Expect the best, plan for the worst, and prepare to be surprised.”

Saturday, September 8, 2012

Good, Average, Bad - Rating My Review

I am grateful that I am blessed with a husband who encourages and supports my writing and a puppy that's a fast learner in regard to behavioral issues.

A few days ago when I was struggling with the perils of writing at home, there was no way would I have considered that I would be able to review my manuscript in a few hours.

As I reviewed scenes, rearranged scenes, and inserted notes for a few additional scenes, I assessed the following:
  • Overall the writing needs polishing, but for a first draft the writing isn't as bad as I feared
  • Some scenes are stronger than others
  • A good amount of the first draft writing stands out, in a positive way
  • Several scenes need to be expanded
  • POV grounding is needed in some scenes
  • Restructuring may be in order; however, the story is intriguing and strong
My reactions at the end of the review were as follows:
  • Excited and looking forward to wordsmithing the next draft
  • Nervous in regard to receiving the developmental edit
  • Expectant about the results of the developmental edit
  • Pleased overall with a cohesiveness and storytelling aspect of first draft
I need to look at a couple of things and spell check, then I will send the reviewed manuscript in to Cathy Yardley (Rock Your Revisions) for the developmental edit.

Scary and exciting!

No matter how this adventure turns out, bottom line, I've done something for my family and me. THAT's enough to make this writer gal grin.